Fiction Workshop         

Barbara Daniels

 

Read to Steal:  Looking at Technique in Short Stories

 

As you read and discuss stories from You’ve Got to Read This, the questions on this list may help you.

 

1.       What aspects of this story would you like to adapt to your own writing?  What kept your interest?  Why?

 

2.       What does the opening line do for the story?

 

3.       What point of view (first, second or third person) is used?  How does it affect the story?

 

4.       How do we find out what the characters in the story are like? (These techniques are known as characterization.)  How are the first impressions of major characters established?  To what extent is character more central to the story than plot?  How much is what we know about the characters crucial to our understanding of the story?

 

5.       Is there any tension between the characters and the setting?

 

6.       How many scenes are there?  Where is action and background summarized instead of put into a scene?  Why?

 

7.       Is material presented in chronological order?  If not, how is the transition into and out of the flashback (a scene presented in the past) handled?

 

8.       What was the most important event in the plot?  How is what happens foreshadowed earlier in the story?  What is the main conflict?

 

9.       Which scene is most important?  Does it enact the most important event in the story?

 

10.   What does the dialogue accomplish?  Where and why is indirect (summarized) dialogue used?  What is intermingled with the dialogue—action, thoughts of the character, body language, meaningful hesitations?

 

11.   How would you describe the style of the story (the way it is written)?  Are long sentences often used?  Short ones?  Ordinary, blunt, or literary language?  What are the rhythms of the story? 

 

12.   What’s the story’s mood?  How is it established?

 

13.   Is the ending satisfying?  Why?  Is there any hint of a concluding moral or truism?  (Generally there isn’t, so this is something to avoid in your own stories.)

 

14.   Think of four different versions of the story you could write by changing narrative strategies.