Rough Drafts
Alyiah:
Once there was a little butterfly named, Sheila. She met a boy butterfly, named Billy, and they flew off together. As they were out flying, they met A poor butterfly, named Sandy, that had no place to live.

Sheila and Billy said, "You can live with us."

Sandy said, "Thank you."

They asked Sandy if she was hungry. "Yes," she replied. They flew off together to find something to eat.

"Oh,oh. Look a spider web! Do not get in it,"said Billy.

Sandy said, "I won't because I'm careful."

But suddenly as Billy was turned around his wing got caught in the web. Sandy and Sheila tried to pull his wing out of the web to save him. They had to bite the web to get Billy's wing out. They got him out just before the spider got home.

"Let's go home and go to bed," said Billy. They had a good night together.


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Brittaney:
Once there was a little girl that lived in Dinosaur Land.

Suzy was walking to school one day. She met a new dinosaur and he told her his name was Max.

She said, "My name is Suzy."

"Hi," said the big dinosaur, "my name is Max."

Max's parents came walking down the street. She says, "There are two big dinosaurs!"

He said, "Don't worry, they're my famly."

"Hi, I am Max's father," said his dad.

"Hi, I am Max's mother," said his mom.

"My name is Suzy," said Suzy.

The school bell rang. "SORRY, I have to go now," said Suzy.

"Ok, we should go too," said his parents.

She walked in to school and everyone said, "There she is".

The cop said, "Can you came with me?"

"Ok," she said.


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Theresa:
My sister and I went to the park. We saw fishes and dogs with their owners. There were ducks swimming in the pond. There was a waterfall. We went fishing for a little while. We caught a fish! We got wet with fish. The fish fell into my lap and my sister screamed. We laughed about it after we put the fish in a bag. We were wet and we went home to change our clothes.

We went in the house and my mom said, "Come back here, you're punished. You are not playing today or tomorrow." We had to go to our rooms.

We climbed out our window. We went to our mom mom and pop pop's house to play on the swings.


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Riley:
The wolf howls at the moon. Wolves eat other animals. That is how they live. They eat deer, fish, rabbits and moles. They may look cute but they are not. The female wolf has a baby called a pup.

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Destinee:
The beach is fun in the summer. I went in the water with my bucket. I scooped some fish up with my bucket. I showed them to my Aunt Deja. She asked, "Can I try it too?" I said, "Yes, I will help you." My aunt and I went out into the ocean with our buckets to go fishing. We put our favorite buckets in the ocean and this big wave came over us. We caught fish while the wave came over us. Then we put the fish back. It was fun but a little scary in the ocean.

Then we walked in to the shore to get something to eat. We had to wait a couple of minutes before we could go into the ocean. Deja found a horseshoe crab on the beach! We picked it up and put the crab back in the ocean. We went back into the ocean to dive into the waves.


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Ronda:
My cat is special to me. She always sits in my lap. I pet her back.

She got outside one day and she went into the woods. A fox tried to catch her and she had to run to the house. The fox chased her to our house and he got stuck through the doorway. I pushed him out of the door with my broom. He ran back to the woods.

The cat went to the little door and he jumped on my lap and sat down on the couch. Then the fox came back to the house and looked in the window. Then the window broke and the fox jumped in to chase us around the house.


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