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| Ronnie: |
| Once upon a time there were nine knights. The nine knights guarded a treasure. I was one of the knights. I was named Ronnie. I was the strongest knight of them all. My horse was all golden. One day nine wizards tried to attack us. They wanted the treasure we were guarding. One wizard fell through our trap door. The trap door had ten tigers in a cage under it. One of the knights got trapped in the cage. They set the whole place was on fire. I saved one of the other knights. We put one of the wizards in the dungeon. Our dragon helped us attack the wizards. One night, the wizards that were not caught by us, got our gold. I took my horse and trotted after the them. The wizards took the gold to there hideout. Four knights stayed behind and guarded the castle. The four other knights went with me. One of the wizards escaped the dungeon. The four knights that stayed fought the wizards. The knights got the gold from the wizards. One of the knights died. We put out the fire and looked to see if everything was here at the castle. We lived happily ever after because the wizards did not attack us again. |
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| Moshe: |
| Once, a Ninjah was born in China. When he grew up he kept his family safe from evil. He saved his family from the blow up at the China tower. Then he found who harmed his family. The badperson’s name was Double X . The Ninjah’s name was Moses. The next day when Moses saw Double X they got in a fight for a while. Then Double X disappeared for several days. Moses went back home. He check on his family. They were safe. Then Double X showed up and said, “Sorry,” because he didn’t like being evil. He said because it made him feel bad he would help Moses fight evil. |
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| Jessica: |
| I like cats and dogs because they can do some funny things. I like to play outside in the swings while I watch my animals. My favorite cat is Bootsie because she's pretty. Bootsie is a funny cat. She only has three legs. I have another cat named Berry Samba. I have dogs too. Their names are Blondie, Gordon and Alligator. My dogs can run fast. One day my dog ate my cat's food. Sometimes my dog sleeps under my bed. Sometimes my dog can sleep under the table. |
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| Kevin: |
| Every day three boys went out to play football. They played until 6:00 each night. When they came in they usually went to bed. They were exhausted! They liked to play football when they weren't in school. The boys' names were Michael, Kevin, and B.J. They wanted to be in the Super Bowl. They practiced every chance they could until they were really good. Their team finally got selected to play in the Super Bowl. They won the Super Bowl! The score was 47 to 17. Their team got better and better. They played the Cowboys. Their number was 34 the other number was 56. Their team got 56 points. They grew up to be champions. They moved to the Raiders and they went against Tampa Bay. B.J. made a interception but the score was 99 for the other team. Raiders had 90. They tried to come back but the Raiders fumbled the football. Tampa Bay scored 110. When the game was over the people came down from the bleachers running very fast. Some people got hurt by the crowd. I think they will try out for the Tampa Bay team next because they are champions. |
| Author's Suggestions for Kevin | Kevin's Story |
| Daijah: |
| I like to watch cats when they play. Let me tell you about some of the funny things my cat does when I watch her. My cat moves with four legs. She eats mice and rats. My cat makes a purr when you rub her. My cat likes to roll over. I like to play with her. I go outside and play with her with a frizbee. When I throw the frizbee she runs after it. I like to watch my cat. |
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| Troy: |
| My story is about two chimpanzees going to the new zoo. When they got there the zookeepers put King and Tiger in a cage. Some people came over to King and Tiger. King threw his food at them! That is very funny they said the zookeeper! What do they eat and drink? These are your best animals! Tiger picked up a log. Then King did a back flip. The zookeeper told them to come for their food. Tiger and King said goodbye to the people. The zookeeper gave them breakfast. He knew they looked forward to him coming to feed them. "You are welcome," said the zookeeper. He had to go to a new cage. Then eighty people came through the gate of the zoo and wanted to see the chimpanzees. One of the men asked the monkeys, "Do you two do some tricks? Tiger had a pie. He threw a pie at him. He splattered whipped cream on his face. King and Tiger laughed. Then all three of them laughed together. They had a fun day at their new zoo. |
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