This document is a partial rebuttal to several statements made in the report: Impacts on Oak Ridge Off-site Releases to the Environment from the Y-12 Plant and Associated Long-term Stewardship Issues by Susan Kaplan of the Institute Technology, Social and Policy Awareness (ITSPA). The technical qualifications and prior interests and positions of the author in this and similar matters are not documented. The rebuttal deals only with statements that impugn the public participation process and the participation of the rebuttal's author. Omission of remarks on other issues should not be taken as acceptance of their claims nor innuendos. The ITSPA report abounds with incomplete descriptions of issues that give a one-sided impression of the topic. The report also suffers from procedural errors; this author was never contacted to determine the "other side of the story" and much of the material quoted was attributed to an un-named landowner making rebuttal difficult and therefore ITSPA must accept the criticisms of their statements. At places in the report references are incomplete making rebuttal difficult. See References for a complete set of references to the LEFPC remediation problem.

The following are the rebuttals of specific statements of the ITSPA report:

1.         Page 7 - "He [Brooks] said the mercury in the floodplain is 'essentially innocuous' because it is one of the most insoluble compounds known.."

Rebuttal: The omission in the report is that the data in the literature also indicated that the adsorption in the human gut was very small. This was also borne out by analysis of the hair and urine of many
Oak Ridge residents by the Tennessee Department of Health. Also samples of hair and feces from a horse pastured for years on the floodplain proved negative as did a sample of tomatoes grown on the flood plain. What the report has missed is that EPA used the solubility and adsorption of highly soluble mercuric chloride as an estimate for the extremely insoluble mercuric sulfide when contrary data and evidence was available.

2.     Page 8 - "The following is a comment made by Brooks in a letter to Joe Lagrone (also published as a letter to the editor of the OAK Ridger), which was upsetting to some:

"I would especially like to thank Mr. David Page and many others of the DOE and contractor staff who assisted me in the presentation of the opposition view during the last few months."

"This is what one unidentified property owner documented in his personal notes about this statement by Brooks:

'To me this was an extraordinary disclosure: DOE coaching a person or persons to appear at a formal public meeting to pressure EPA and the State of Tennessee to accept higher cleanup limits, when such limits accrues direct benefits to DOE. …'

Rebuttal: Since when was civility a sin. Having the same objectives as DOE has a simple explanation: we both wanted to see a remediation that was based on the best data and that would be both safe and cost effective. Also saving what once was estimated as $1 billion is a benefit to the taxpayer as well as DOE. Notice the subtle change of the verb from "assist" to "coach"; I never said coach. Notice the plural persons when I spoke for myself alone. Anyone knowing Fred Maienschein, Josh Johnson and myself knows that being "coached" is not in our vocabulary. Mr. Page was tasked with enabling one of the first public participation programs and he did. Mr. Page's assistance was limited to giving me names of risk assessors and a toxicologist to talk to in order to gain understanding of the EPA risk calculation process and answered many questions about the project. He also asked SAIC, a contractor, to supply me with computer-readable mercury levels to avoid re-keying and to discuss how they had massaged the data. He never suggested any remediation levels or the direction my effort should take nor was he asked.

I do not believe that the thanking Mr. Page should be classified as a conspiracy or collusion and the assistance I received was available to anyone who asked politely.

3.     Page 9 – "The property owner then commented on the open letter to Joe LaGrone, DOE, from Al Brooks, a citizen , a citizen thanking Dave Page for help in preparing his technical criticism of the selected 180 ppm of cleanup level. 'Something here appears all wrong. Al Brooks spoke nine times at the public meeting (More times and more pages of transcript than anyone. else). Were the proceedings manipulated?"

Rebuttal: Thanking Dave Page has been covered in 2 above. So I spoke nine times, but the report never says whether or not the technical contributions were worthwhile or just the emotional utterances of a concerned citizen. Both Elmer Aiken (EPA) and Fred Zaphrin (SAI) said the public's claims were technically correct but EPA did it differently incorporating safety factors into the input data; a position based on their congressional mandate and hence political not scientific. Further I was and still am unaware that public participants were limited on the number of times they could talk; especially on such a technical and controversial subject as risk assessment. Perhaps there's something about freedom of speech I don’t understand

In Conclusion

The worst transgressions of the ITSPA report are not impugning this author who is now retired 21 years and whose past colleagues, including the friendly opposition, know he is not "coachable". The real damage is to currently employed DOE employees, Page in particular, and to the image of the DOE public participation efforts. Ironically, The Lower East Fork Poplar Creek project was as open as any I have participated in and DOE because of their openness is falsely accused of manipulation and conspiracy. I don't see how this leads to neither improved DOE public participation nor an improved Environmental Management program.

On the surface the allegations are ludicrous, with whom did I conspire:

a)     DOE including Dave Page – I was openly opposed to DOE as long as they appeared responsible for distorted risk assessment and thereafter opposed to their silence to EPA's risk assessment shortcomings. Co-conspirators do not oppose each other.

b)     Maienschien, and Johnson – We openly acknowledged our mutual concerns; conspiracies are not open.

c)     The public but the vast majority of the public commented that the 180 level was too low.

The ITSPA report is divisive. It divides:

a)     The DOE from the public and inhibits trust on false grounds. Since the Agency for Toxic Substances and Disease Registry (ATSDR) used DOE data in their Public Health Assessments, these are also are clouded by the report.

b)     The public by misrepresentation of the relationship between DOE and one side of the issue it confirms in the minds of the opposing side that their opposition is dishonorable and their evidence can be ignored.

a)     Landowners – How am I to know who harbors such low opinions of my efforts and how can I make explanation to unknown sources? I consider both of the unidentified large landowners (see Table 9) as friends but am human enough to wonder which one is poorly informed.

b)     The public and science – All of the views opposed to EPA risk assessment were based on published or project data, represented hundreds (or thousands) of hours of determined work and yet the report brushes this aside by labeling it "manipulation" and worse. Thus reducing its status to opinion. See Le Potpourri Pages of Nuclear Waste Disposal at ORR (Old links/CERCLA Critique) for output from this effort.

The report not only presents incomplete data on the several subjects but it selectively chooses the "evidence" to support a particular of view and hence is an advocacy paper not an impartial review of the problem.

The paper frequently assumes and implies that any activity ultimately paid for by DOE is suspect. This ignores that the DOE was the ultimate (though unwilling) source of ITSPA's own funding. Is the pot calling the kettle black? This all ignores the fact that state and federal laws, rules and budgeting require Agencies, e.g.. ATSDR, TDEC, EPA to provide DOE with certain services and that DOE should reimburse them. Any changes in these rules will have to come from legislatures. The agencies cannot be expected to violate the law. This comment is a red herring as the funding of all federal functions are under the control of Congress by constitutional authority.

This ITSPA report should be read with caution; the innuendos, the lack of citations, the incompleteness of citations and the anonymity of quotes will guide you past its biases. There are statements made with out proof or citation or technical justification and these must be considered as opinion. There are few validations of claims and there is no claim to peer review such as the DOE and ATSDR documents are submitted to. The references (above) give some idea of the scope of the problem and the diverse opinion on EPA risk assessment.

 There is an irony in this matter: I still have the file for printing business cards for the time I was asked and consented to serve as a technical consultant for ITSPA:

I am grateful I was never called to consult; I don't like the way they impugn their employees..

A Personal Contribution of:

Alfred A. Brooks

LEFPC Landowner