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Garbl's Plain Language Resources is an annotated directory of Web sites, books, agencies and organizations that can help you use plain language--or plain English--techniques to improve your writing.

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Plain language writing is a technique of organizing information in ways that make sense to the reader. It uses straightforward, concrete, familiar words.

Plain language matches the needs of the reader with your needs as a writer, leading to effective, efficient communication. It is effective because readers can understand your message. It is efficient because readers can understand your message the first time they read it.

The international plain language movement is an effort of businesses, organizations, agencies and individuals dedicated to presenting information so it makes sense to most people.

According to proponents, plain language is communication designed to meet the needs of the intended audience, so people can understand information that is important to their lives.

Garbl's Fat-Free-Writing Links--This Web page provides a variety of online resources with tips to help you cut the fat from your writing--so that your readers can easily chew, digest and be nourished by your top-choice words.

Garbl's Concise Writing Guide provides simpler alternatives to wordy, verbose, overstated or pompous words and phrases.

Garbl's Editorial Style Manual--About concise (adj.), concisely (adv.), conciseness (n.).

Writing Resources Online

Answering the Critics of Plain Language--by Professor Joseph Kimble of the Thomas Cooley Law School of Lansing, Michigan.

From Volume 5 of The Scribes Journal of Legal Writing (1994-1995).

Brushing Up on Fundamentals--Peter Butt, Faculty of Law, University of Sydney, Australia

Butt's conference presentation describes the five global fundamentals of plain language and 10 particular fundamentals.

Cheryl Stephens on Plain Language--Plain language trainer, coach, consultant, writer and editor, Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

An excellent series of articles, including "Building Plain Language from the Ground Up," "An Introduction to Plain Language" and "Design Issues."

David Elliott on Plain Language--David C. Elliott, Legislative Drafting Services, Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Several articles on legislating plain language, making legal documents readable, writing collective agreements in plain language and writing in plain language. Not just for lawyers.

Drafting Legal Documents--U.S. Office of the Federal Register, National Archives and Records Administration

Besides guidelines for legal document structure, includes advice about ambiguity, clear writing, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, cross references and expressions to avoid.

From plain English to global English--Rachel McAlpine, writer, trainer and Web content consultant, Wellington, New Zealand

McAlpine takes plain English techniques another step--to making documents easy to read and understand worldwide for people who use English as a foreign language.

How to write clearly (PDF)--From the Fight the Fog campaign of the Translation Service for the European Commission

"Whether your job is drafting or translating, here are some hints--not rules--that will help you to write clearly and make sure your message ends up in your readers' brains, not in their bins."

How to Write Well--Chris Ziska, Ziska Designs, London

A nine-part guide to learning how to write effectively using plain language and plain English

Plain English at Work--produced for Australia's Department of Employment, Education, Training and Youth Affairs and the Australian National Training Authority.

Excellent guide for helping organizations develop plain English documents.

Plain English from Plain English Campaign: Free Guides--Plain English Campaign is a privately owned business based in the United Kingdom.

Ten free guides as PDF files, including How to write in plain English, A to Z of alternative words, Plain English guide to writing letters, Plain English tips for clear websites and How to write reports in plain English.

A Plain English Handbook: How to Create Clear SEC Disclosure Documents--U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission.

Not just for writing SEC documents, this downloadable PDF file describes how to free yourself of impediments to effective communications like stilted jargon and complex constructions.

Plain Language: A Handbook for Writers in the U.S. Federal Government (PDF, 287KB)--Richard Lauchman, The Lauchman Group, Rockville, Maryland.

The organization of ideas, tone, word choice, point of view, format, and overall ease of reading--those are the issues described in the useful handbook.

PlainTrain: Plain Language Online Training--adapted from publications of the National Literacy Secretariat--Human Resources Development Canada.

Eight topic sections on introducing plain language, your reader and your purpose, organizing ideas, using appropriate words, clear and simple sentences, clear and effective paragraphs, design and testing.

PlainTrain: Plain Language Online Training--Digest

A summary of the entire PlainTrain program that's easier to print and view offline.

StyleWriter: The Plain English Editor--Editor Software, United Kingdom

I use and endorse this downloadable software. Running from within leading word processors, it searches for complex words, jargon, abstract words, wordy phrases, hidden verbs, passive verbs, clichés, long sentences and other writing faults. It then offers advice on editing each sentence. Free demo download; full version costs US$160.

Word Dog Plain English Editor--Plain English Technologies, Burnaby, British Columbia, Canada

Downloadable WordDog application sniffs out wordy phrases and redundancies, then suggests clear, crisp words. Free demo download; full version costs $20-25.

Writing for Dollars, Writing to Please--by Professor Joseph Kimble of the Thomas Cooley Law School of Lansing, Michigan.

How plain language saves agencies and companies money; from Volume 6 of The Scribes Journal of Legal Writing (1996-1997).

Writing Styleguide and Dictionary of Plain English (PDF, 72KB)--Duncan Kent & Associates Ltd., a technical communication company in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Alphabetical list of difficult words and phrases, word-wasting idioms, compound prepositions, formal phrases, and gender-specific words and phrases--with alternatives.

Writing User-Friendly Documents--link to Word document produced by the U.S. Plain Language Action & Information Network.

Twenty-three tips organized in six parts available online or for download as an PDF, Word or WordPerfect file.

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Writing Resources On Paper

These books are available through my association with Amazon.com. I own and recommend the books by Bailey, Cutts, Gowers and Lauchman.

	*The Complete Plain Words,* 2002--Ernest Gowers
	*Legal Writing in Plain English,* 2001--Bryan A. Garner
	*Oxford Guide to Plain English,* second edition, 2004--Martin Cutts, co-founder of the Plain English Campaign
	The Plain English Approach to Business Writing, 1997--Edward P. Bailey Jr.
	Plain English for Lawyers, 1998--Richard C. Wydick
	Plain English at Work: A Guide to Writing and Speaking, 1996--Edward P. Bailey Jr. (includes The Plain English Approach to Business Writing)
	*Plain Language and the Document Revolution,* second edition, 1999--Carol M. Baldwin
	*A Plain Language Handbook for Legal Writers,* second edition, 1999--Christine Mowatt
	*Plain Language Pleadings,*1996--Carol Ann Wilson
	*Plain Style: Techniques for Simple, Concise, Emphatic Business Writing*, 1993--Richard Lauchman, author of Plain Language: A Handbook for Writers in the U.S. Federal Government

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Organizations, Agencies and Businesses

The Plain Language Association International, or PLAIN, is the leading voluntary organization of plain language advocates and professionals with members in Canada, the United States, Australia, England, Sweden, South Africa and New Zealand. Besides its free Web resources, it offers a free online e-mail forum for discussing plain language and clear writing.

Below is an incomplete list of other organizations, government agencies and companies campaigning for plain language:

	Clarity--worldwide British-based lawyers' group campaigning for plain legal language
	Impact Information Plain Language Services--Bill DuBay, consultant, Costa Mesa, California
	Plain English Campaign--commercial advocacy, training, writing and editing organization based in the United Kingdom
	Plain English Committee, State Bar of Michigan--Plain language columns from the Michigan Bar Journal
	Plain Language Commission--commercial training, writing and editing organization in Derbyshire, United Kingdom
	Plain Language Service, part of the National Literacy and Health Program, Canadian Public Health Association, Ottawa
	U.S. Plain Language Action & Information Network--a government-wide group of employee volunteers working to improve communications from the government to the public
	The Word Centre, Sheffield, United Kingdom--commercial editing and training firm.

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Updated June 9, 2008.