I had my suspicions about this e-mail. There were a few
things that just didn't look right. The first thing I noticed was
the subject line of the e-mail "ebaY Contest".
Well, I've never seen the name eBay appear as "ebaY" in text
other than their graphical logo, all other references to the company are
always "eBay". Then there was the first line of text in
the e-mail right under their logo "Ebay Contest: You could
win..." what? a capital "E" on eBay? I'll
give the intern perhaps one typo but not two in the same document.
We start this announcement with "You could win this hot Ford Explorer Tdi".
This "hot" Ford Explorer? Is the truck stolen, perhaps
she just runs a little warm? But hey! It is the Tdi model!
What the heck is a Tdi, I bet Ford can't answer that one, but go talk to
Land Rover and they can tell you all about their Tdi line.
Next, under the nice picture of the "hot" Ford Explorer we
have the line "All you have to do is to login to 'My Ebay' and
confirm your entrance." Wow, what a line, I'll just hit on a few
quick points:
- "... have to do is to login to..." ... Too many "to"s
don't you think? At least its not two too many.
- "Ebay" again, the 'e' is capitalized
- login : eBay doesn't use "login" they use
"sign in"
- "... and confirm your entrance." My
"entrance"? This probably could have been worded better.
The next line goes on to say "After that you will get a Unique Contest Key that will represent you in the draw".
Well, first we have a "Unique Contest Key", it must be a
rather important key to justify all those capital letters. So, the
"Unique Contest Key" is going to represent me in the
draw. Hmmm, I'm not sure I even want to touch that line.
I'll let you look up the sixteen plus definitions of the word draw at Merriam-Webster
Online. Last, we find the small print at the bottom of the
e-mail with the capitalized "Ebay".
Update:
A special thank you to Mike and Brent who e-mailed me and let me know
that the picture isn't even of a Ford Explorer but a Ford Expedition!
Thanks guys. |