7
Tips to Avoid the Circular File
by
Kelly Strand Anderson
When I
was a journalist, I received more than 100 news releases each day, and that was
for a small local newspaper. Imagine how many news releases flood the newsroom
floor of a large, national publication. And with the pressure of limited time
and strict deadlines, I had to sort through the releases speedily, leaving
myself a very small pile that looked promising for articles -- and tossing the
rest aside.
I had
only a few minutes to spend on each news release. And it wasn't a process of
picking out a great news release; it was a quick process of elimination. Here
are seven tips to make sure your press release ends up in the small, select
pile.
All
the Facts, and Fast
Include
the five W's of journalism -- who, what,
when, where, and why -- at the beginning of your release. This is the most
important information, and it belongs in the first paragraph, with less
important information following. I often had time to read only the first
paragraph or two of a news release, so I had to grasp the entire story quickly
in that small space of words.
Offer
news, not just hype, and definitely not
jargon from your marketing collateral. Remember you're not trying to get the
media to buy from you. And journalists have seen and heard it all before --
they're skeptical. So make it substantive. If you want to throw in an opinion,
present it as a quote from your CEO, further down in your release. Better yet,
use a quote from an outside party, such as a business partner or an analyst.
Avoid
high-tech jargon that might turn off
your audience, including journalists. While the media and the general population
are becoming increasingly comfortable with technical terms, you should still
play it safe. Write so a reader at any level of education or expertise can
understand what you're saying. If journalists are interested, they'll contact
you for the specifics. If a news release made me feel technically inadequate, I
trashed it.
Back
up your claims with facts. I can't tell you how many times I saw news
releases from several competing companies with each one saying it was "No.
1," "the first," "the best," "the biggest."
Use factual information. Don't say you're No. 1 unless you really are -- and if
you really are, I'd probably already know. If you claim to be No.1, or anything
superlative, refer to a survey or a study that proves the point, or quote a
third-party expert who states it as a fact.
Form
Follows Function
Be
concise -- cut out the underbrush. I was often amazed by the lengths,
quite literally, some companies would go to in order to tell me a simple story.
I'd think, "Do they really think I have time to read all this?" The
answer is an emphatic "No!" Keep your release short, simple, and to
the point. Don't go beyond two pages; just one page is best. Remember that the
purpose of your release isn't to give the whole story, but to intrigue
journalists so they'll want more details.
Check
and double-check -- proofread your news release, have one or two
other people proofread it, then proof it again. Be sure there are no spelling or
grammatical errors.
All
communication coming from your company reflects its professionalism -- or lack
thereof. Errors in your releases, or a cavalier attitude between the lines, give
the impression that bigger problems lurk below.
Use
the correct format, printing your news
release on single-sided 8 1/2-inch by 11-inch paper, preferably letterhead, with
double-spaced text and a 1 1/2-inch margin on all sides. In the upper left-hand
corner, type "For Immediate Release." Under this, type the date of the
release.
The
contact information goes a few spaces below the date, including contact name,
telephone number, e-mail, and address. Place the headline centered in bold below
the contact information. The body of the release should start with the city and
state of origin.
If the
release goes beyond one page, use " -more- " at the end of the first
page and an identifying phrase and page number at the top of the second page.
End the release with the hash marks ###.