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When writing for a history course you will often be constructing arguments to answer a question or relay information. Creating and justifying a strong argument is part of analysis (see What is Analysis?). To illustrate your mastery of writing and analysis, there are some words you can use to help the reader understand your points. To jog your memory, here are some words that you can use to create analysis:

why? causes? comparisons?
how? effects? differences?
when? changes? process/steps
where? continuities? point of view?

More detail can be given if action or descriptive words are used to present evidence given in an analysis.

Descriptive Verbs

Compare

Contrast

asserts

agree

conversely

compliments

also

differently

demonstrates

as well (as)

disagree

embraces

both/all

however

exemplifies

in addition

in contrast

illustrates

in common

none

indicates

shares the view

on the other hand

portrays

similarly

unlike

reflects

neither

either

reveals

too

 

signifies

 

 

strengthens

 

 

symbolizes

 

 

undermines

 

 

change

 

 

continue

 

 

transform

 

 

evolved

 

 

emerge

 

 

revolutionize

 

 

connect

 

 


Are there other words that could be added to this table?

The use of transitional phrases also helps to guide the reader point by through the essay. Additionally, transitional phrases provide organization. Some teachers discourage the use of transitional phrases, but in the class, you are encouraged to use them in order to demonstrate analysis.

To clarify a sequence of events: first, second, third, next, finally, last. (However, NEVER start each body paragraph with one of these words. The sequencing of paragraphs does not indicate analysis, but rather a simplistic style.)

To show a similar relationship: similarly, in like manner, likewise

To point out dissimilarity: in opposition to, in contrast to, on the other hand

To emphasize a point: indeed, in fact, surely, certainly 

To show or point out a result: consequently, as a result, therefore, hence

To summarize a position: in summation, finally, in conclusion, in short

To illustrate a point: for example, by way of illustration, for instance

To contrast a position: on the other hand, however, but, yet, despite, although

To record time: now, gradually, later, eventually, immediately, at once, at this point, next, afterword, soon, then

Instead of constantly using the word “said,” try using one of the words below. These words have much stronger connotations than “said.”

Synonym

Meaning

added

to embellish or enhance an argument

continued

to further an earlier point

stated

to say, usually confined to quotes or paraphrases from documents

announced

to declared publicly or formally

asserted

to state positively, with great confidence but no objective proof

commented

to make a remark to explain, interpret, or criticize

declared

to make known clearly and openly

observed

to mention casually

remarked

to make a brief, casual statement of opinion

reported

to give an account of

 There are, of course, many more words that can lend strength to your argument. Think about those now, and add them to this handout. Share with me and other students. Try to use these words when you write in other classes. You won’t be disappointed. 

 

 Adapted from Jenny Schinleber, Cypress Creek High School, Orlando, FL 32824

 

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