FALCON'S POV - PREDAWN
Dismal and dim, nothing can be
made out clearly. It might be the desert. Then again, it might
not.
A light flickers and vanishes. Then again a little ways away.
Then again. . .
EXT. EAST VALLEY RD. - DAWN
(Closer)
Below, a crossroads with thin radiating spokes, gloomy and stark.
There are luminescent patches of tule fog that dot the meadows
of Emma's Farm like sheep. Mountains to the right and ahead are
shadowy and still draped in blackness.
Headlights approach. A car crests the last rise before the crossroads.
NEW ANGLE - CROSSROADS
A 1996 white Ford Taurus slows as it approaches the crossroads.
On its door is a gold embossed "SHERIFF" emblem. There
is an emergency light-bar on the roof, but no containment screen
across the back of the front seat. No visible weaponry, no shotgun
mounted on the top of the dash.
The Taurus slows and turns right.
A mangled road sign, half-missing and faint with rust, reads "COUNTY
W.". The remainder of the sign is wrinkled and illegible.
EXT. SHERIFF'S CAR (MOVING)
On the meadow side of 'County W'., one particularly thick finger
of fog extends toward the road ahead.
INT. SHERIFF'S CAR
A half-eaten jelly doughnut is on some wax-paper on the passenger
seat. The light from the radio flickers. The car's occupant remains
UNSEEN.
A short burst of STATIC, then the last bar of 'SILENT NIGHT' is
HEARD.
VALLEY
ANNOUNCER (OS)
That's
it, valley birds. A little peace and
quiet
if you're just in from the barn chores.
Yeah,
right. Until your kids come charging
down
stairs to tear into their Christmas presents.
How
do they know. . . well, nevermind.
Let's
get to the hog report. Chicago Stock
and
futures will be closed today through
New
Year's in observance of the new
millennium.
Sounds like those boys plan to
do
some partying. At county seat, record
sales.
. . .
The sheriff reaches over and turns off the radio. A Masonic ring
is SEEN on his finger.
SHERIFF'S POV - REAR-VIEW MIRROR
The falcon continues to circle on a morning thermal.
BACK TO SCENE
The sheriff is in his mid-fifties, good-shape, face weathered
and lined. He is relaxed, but alert. This is not a social call.
NEW ANGLE - ROAD AHEAD - MORNING
The structure of Barrow Creek Bridge is an uncertain mirage shrouded
in dense tule fog. The meadows on the left appear ghostly and
surreal.
Beyond the bridge, low pasture hills gently slope away to the
right, towards the dairy, UNSEEN beyond them.
EXT. - BARROW BRIDGE
The sheriff's car slows and eases onto the bridge. Its thick oaken
beams yield under the tires with a dull soulful sound. The car
plays a low-register xylophone dirge across the bridge surface.
The road on the other side narrows. The car pulls onto a shallow
dirt turnout by the pasture fence. The engine shuts off.
NEW ANGLE ON CAR
The sheriff adjusts his pager hooked on his belt and scans the
near surroundings as he walks back toward the bridge. He is not
wearing either a gun or a stick.
Near the bridge, a couple of strips of black cloth hang on a lower
strand of the post&wire fence. A remnant and knot of red rag
hangs on a higher strand. In a weedy ditch below, the rest of
the red rag lies next to an empty wicker creel.
A faint TRAIN WHISTLE blows in the distance.
EXT. ON THE BRIDGE
A gray, bleak morning. Fallen trees and long branches stick up
out of the tule fog along the creek like the masts of lost ships.
At the center of the bridge the sheriff stops and leans on the
oak railing. He gazes into the dark water below.
SHERIFF'S POV
Dull shapes and an occasional glint of silver can be SEEN passing
by in the fog shrouded water.
EXT. BARROW CREEK
As the creek flows over a deep trough near the bridge, its surface
becomes more placid.
The bloated, rotting bodies of fish float by. Their dull milky
eyes stare skyward.
ANGLE UNDER BRIDGE
Dead fish and rotten parts litter the banks and catch in the sedge
and weed. One fish, with a distended belly and a large swollen
blister on its side, drifts to the bank and catches in some grass.
The blister breaks and a SIGH of escaping gas is HEARD.
As black puss BUBBLES from the fish's open wound, a loud CRACK!
Shatters the soulful spectacle of death.
BACK TO BRIDGE
A solid looking, 3" bridge rail snaps under the weight of
the sheriff's arm. The sudden noise wakes him from his day dreaming.
He walks back to the car.
NEW ANGLE
Above and behind the sheriff, the falcon still circles in the
weak light of morning.
INT. SHERIFF'S CAR - MOVING - WINDSHIELD VIEW
The car continues on, rising gradually along the edge of the low
hills that skirt this extreme end of the meadow.
The sheriff makes a sharp S-turn with one hand and reaches for
the radio button with the other. Brakes SQUEAL, tires skid. The
front grill of the car is pressed up against the shanks of a cow.
Its head protrudes over the hood of the car. Its breath partially
steams the windshield. It has a dazed mean look about it. The
lower jaw foams with mucus and pus.
EXT. SHERIFF'S CAR
A momentary standoff. The cow gives it up and trots away on unsteady
legs over the hilly pasture toward the dairy. The Sheriff gets
out of the car, watching the cow lope away.
A sudden CRACK! breaks the sheriff's concentration.
ANGLE ON HILL
Above him, on the hill, the hind-side of an old sow is SEEN sticking
out of the brush around a small stand of trees. The pig rears
and twists, trampling the brush around it until most of the interior
clearing is exposed.
(Closer)
The pig continues thrashing, demolishing an exposed lean-to, benches,
fifty-gallon drums and other equipment of OREY's still. The sheriff
waits, wary and alert. The pig is dangerous.
(Closer)
Orey's still is a mess. The pig has demolished everything. The
Sheriff looks around. He picks up a torn bloody work-shirtsleeve
and examines it. The Sheriff pokes in the brush a little and then
scans the nearby hills. They are empty and silent. He returns
to his car.
INT. SHERIFF'S CAR - (IN MOTION)
The mountains ahead are dark and uninviting as the road crests
the hill shanks and then slopes back to the valley floor. Ahead,
at the mountain's foot it turns sharply to the left.
EXT. FARM APPROACH
The wooded fens on the car's right look foreboding and dark. The
car sloshes through some shallow puddles on the gravel road, then
follows the road around to the left and onto the back entrance
to Emma's farm.
Glimpses of a large barn can be SEEN through small stands of trees
that line both sides of the road.
INT - SHERIFF'S CAR - EMMA'S FARM
The sheriff pulls into a clearing at the back of a large well-painted
and well-kept barn. The barn doors at both ends are open. One
of them is hanging strangely akimbo by its upper hinge.
EXT. BARN
The sheriff stops, gets out and SCANS the fenced field to his
right. There is a gaping hole at the near end of a long corral
fence that runs along the side of the barn. Broken fence rail
dangle from posts or lay scattered in the field beside the corral.
The boards are freshly splintered.
A dead calf, its body badly broken, lays half-covered in some
tall weeds by the fence-break. Flies are drinking at its eyes.
ANGLE ON SHERIFF
The sheriff walks toward the barn. Through the open doors a clearing
some ways beyond the other end of the barn can be SEEN. A large
crow is pecking at something on the ground. It looks up in the
sheriff's direction and flies off. The sheriff continues walking
around the left side of the barn and calls out.
SHERIFF
Em!
Emma!
There is no answer. The sheriff walks down the outside length
of the barn approaching the back of a stone farmhouse to his left.
The sheriff stops by the nearest of two curtainless windows at
the back of the farmhouse.
SHERIFF'S POV
The view through the dining room to the kitchen window is empty.
The inside is dark and quiet. No lights are on.
BACK TO SCENE
The sheriff moves around to the front of the house.
SHERIFF
Emma?
Emma! Are you there?
Still no answer. The front porch is empty. A crow sits on the
back of an over-stuffed sofa. It looks at the sheriff and flies
off. A brief gust of wind blows.
To the sheriff's right, at the edge of the large clearing out
in front of the barn and beyond some chicken coops, a piece of
white cloth rolls a little on the ground.
The sheriff walks to where the cloth is, picks it up and EXAMINES
it.
SHERIFF'S POV
A torn strip of white leather is in his hand. Some of its elaborate
bead-work still clings to the ragged edges. Dark stains cover
much of the rest.
The sheriff closes his hand around the material. Blood bubbles
from the cloth and squeezes between his fingers. He opens his
hand. It is dripping with wet blood.
More scraps of cloth and small clumps of organic looking matter
lay nearby.
BACK TO SCENE
The sheriff walks over to some gooey-looking mass about the size
of a fist. He kneels down to examine it. A shadow passes by.
EXT. THE CLEARING - (IN MOTION)
The clearing is strewn with small pieces of organic matter and
fabric. A crazy follow-the-dots pattern of white stuff, gray stuff,
matted stuff that becomes denser near the center. A shadow passes
over the clearing. The pieces are not very large, unrecognizable
and scattered among a confusing mosaic of hoof-prints, meat-scraps
and cattle diarrhea. Another shadow passes along the ground.
LOW ANGLE ON BLACKISH CLUMP
At the far side of the clearing a blackish clump moves, a reddish
eye blinks. The crow looks up and then returns to picking at something
pinned beneath its claws.
From behind, OUT OF SHOT, a small stone is thrown. It whizzes
past the crow's head. The bird looks up and then resumes picking.
SHERIFF
(OS)
Get
off there! Go on!
BACK TO SCENE
The sheriff looks in the direction of the bird. He cocks his arm
to throw again.
SHERIFF
Get
away! Get away from_
The sheriff throws. The bird makes a startled flutter and flies
off.
SHERIFF
_her.
The Sheriff scans the clearing. His eyes close a moment. A shadow
passes nearby. He opens his eyes and looks at the sky.
ANGLE ON THE SUN
Across the clearing and above barrow hill, the sun hangs dull
and dirty looking. Blank and pitiless.
BACK TO SCENE
The sheriff looks down at the cloth in his red, wet palm. The
shadow passes again. The sheriff looks nearly overhead.
He tightens his grip on the bloody cloth.
SHERIFF
(agonized)
Oh
no.
SHERIFF'S POV
The falcon makes one more circuit of its climbing spiral and then
flies off.
BACK TO SCENE
The sheriff continues to stare at the empty sky.
FREEZE SCENE
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