Editing, Consulting, and Ghostwriting Services
My areas of expertise are: Science fiction and fantasy, romance and erotica, some historical settings, videogame design, interactive fiction, and anime/manga. For a flat fee of $20 (payed in advance) I will review a story or game concept/outline/design document, describe what I think of various aspects and why I hold that opinion, and make constructive suggestions about structure, worldbuilding, focus, approach, theme, and psychology. Or for $4 per thousand words I will read a script or story and make detailed comments and suggestions for improvement of scene flow, character and relationship development, dialogue, and otherwise tweaking the script/story to make it maximally powerful and polished. (Note: this does not include correcting spelling, punctuation, or grammar.) For $4 per thousand words I will proofread a finished script or story, or ghostwrite a script or story into more smooth, correct, and attractive American English.
Let There Be justice - A framing device for a science-fantasy epic.
Anahata - Script of a scene in an RPG where a heroine bent on revenge attempts to collect her fourth chakra tattoo but runs into an unexpected problem.
Becoming The Storm - Script for the intro movie of a science-fantasy RPG involving a space academy and starship fleet of 'justice agents'.
A Creation Myth - An alien culture's explanation of the origin of the world, the sun, and life, embedded in an elementary school lesson.
Game Design Document for Xenallure: A Tapestry of Hearts - This is a large but not complete design document for a single player RPG/dating sim. It is here to show my game design style and ability, as well as my ability to create and manage documentation. I created almost all of the content in this document and all of the organization, which evolved through more than a dozen versions.
Warning! Content below this point is for viewers over 18 only!
YAOI = gay male romance
The following stories and story outlines may include any of: gay weddings, male pregnancy and childbirth, lactatation and nursing, incest, bestiality, slavery/captivity (minimal brutality), mentions of rape (but no on-screen rape), and wierd science fistion/magic stuff such as implanting eggs into people. But, it all has happy endings. :)
Uke On Top - a script for a yaoi original animated movie. Mostly complete.
A Dragon And A Wedding - yaoi graphic novel outline and partial script
Skin Shapes - yaoi mpreg graphic novel outline and partial script
